我的演讲稿

风吹沙地

丝蕾背杯英语风采大赛的演讲稿,嘿嘿
Teachers and follow students, thank you for giving me the honor to stand here! my name is yelinhong, I am a sophomore. and my major is applied chemistry . my tilte is I will always be happy.
  When I was a little girl, I had dreamed a lot about my future.. I had dreamed to be a singer star, standing at the stage accepting overwhelming applause. I had dreamed to be a scientist, through my hard working, I made a solution to a difficult problem and  I received world-wide fame. And I had even dreamed that if one day the alien had invaded our planet I would have desperately protect my people even lose my life.
# P7 K1 |5 u& p7 @  Ignorant day had passed. And now I am an adult. Although I want to be an outstanding person, I know I am just a common girl.
3 q, ?8 X2 T( t1 @& uI will graduate peacefully, then find a common work living an ordinary life. I will  put my heart in my work and fulfill my talents. And some day, I will encounter my Mr.Right. we will roam in the countryside in vocation, see the birds twittering in the trees .we will,  love our parents, love our friends. love our neighbours. Everything is developing peacefully. As far as I am concerned, that life is what I am longing for .Thank you for your attention.
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风吹沙地

It was the first time I write so much

yzhlinux

原来你是应化，I 现在终于 SEE 了

yzhlinux

"I would have desperately protect my people even lose my life"
So Cool sentence , I admire you for your grandness ....

风吹沙地

It is just a little girl's mirage.

flamewing

don't like a little girl but a lord~

心似琉璃

WELL DONE ！A GOOD JOB。

midi

good boy!

<>Hey master, here I wanna say something... ya know what? some words be used in your presentation is not very common used in English Speaking countries. Especially for the speaking.. When you write down this, it does make sense. However, when you speak out it's quite different with your wirting. Don't wirte the presentation like a essay..That's very important point....  Wow...ya are good in vocabularies..</P>

cy327

<>Well done !!!</P>

肛门里的手

your dreams are very 没个性！don`t dream through your life .

muppetcity

原帖由 winman 于 2004-11-6 13:18 发表 Hey master, here I wanna say something... ya know what? some words be used in your presentation is not very common used in English Speaking countries. Especially for the speaking.. When you write down ... ->Hey, moderator. I want to say something here. You know what? Some of the words used in your presentation are not commonly used in English speaking countries, especially for giving a speech. When you write them down, they don't make sense. However, talking is quite different from writing. Don't write presentations like an essay. That's a very important point.

winman该用户已被删除

* x$ R6 v' l0 K- {& s  E1 S By the way, why is "该用户已被删除"? I hope it was not for criticizing the moderator. After reading that, I dare not,for fear of getting banned, make any suggestion in public to Ms.风吹沙地 on how to improve her work. .

' s, A* d9 z9 Q+ j. C& B: C/ y/ M[ 本帖最后由 muppetcity 于 2009-4-2 09:51 编辑 ]

myhomeyyj

WELL DONE!