我写的英文版军训打油诗一首

想~想

<>To be excellent as my mate</P>
9 w9 p; y) e( o/ n, Q. Q; \
<>The wind blows away the cloud,</P>
5 V! F" q3 R1 O( Z9 S5 C$ G% u<>The sun shines bitterly on the ground.</P>
<>I feel pain on my feet,</P>
1 K; P6 u" M& o! c# f. V6 O' R" ]<>My back is covered with sweat,</P>
+ P  a* {* U% K6 @( O9 d; @<>My knees is shaking,</P>
<>The military training is tiring.</P>
<>But I know everyone will bear the hardship,</P>
<>No one will give up.</P>
<>With the discinpline in my mind,</P>
7 D% s$ g& p* o7 Y8 g! |! @* c<P>I will obey the offical's command.</P>
" T4 u6 l4 ^7 T8 C* H1 X<P>I will do my best,</P>
) z- h1 U9 S, H) M& S" Q. j<P>To be excellent as my mate.</P>

风吹沙地

哈哈有意思,不过应该是To be excellent as my mateS吧

<>There're some words that can't be undersstood by me.</P><>How wish you were here!!My Longman!!</P>